One minute horror movie adapted from 2 sentence horror story...eeek
I begin tucking him into bed and he tells me, “Daddy check for monsters under my bed.” I look underneath for his amusement and see him, another him, under the bed, staring back at me quivering and whispering, “Daddy there’s somebody on my bed.”-Juan J Ruiz
Preliminary outline- to include preliminary opening idea (Wells), articulated support paragraph ideas
Not acceptable example:
This is a better start:
III. Actors confirming every tired cliche of action films
A) Actor X- Reluctant hero-Love turns his heart for good
1) Sample of cheesy dialogue
a) "Cassandra I never knew what love was until I looked into your beautiful blue eyes..."
i) Insert sarcasm
B) Retired Assassin comes back for one last job.
1) # times we hear how he was the best
i) "Do you know who you are messing with?!"
2) Big boss sends out younger/eccentric team to "neutralize" our hero.
This outline reflects sharper observation and an obvious strategy to organize the critique.